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昂立雅思名師豆大洋丨碰見雅思大作文,我該怎麽辦?

發布時間:2019-06-13 作者:昂立外語 來源于:昂立外語網站
  

很多烤鴨學生都會很頭疼,前有小作文的刁難,後有大作文的折磨,每次考完寫作,

都像是蛻了一層皮。那今天我們就先來看看如何搞定大作文吧~

 

篇幅的關系,今天不會唠嗑完全部,後續文章還請繼續關注我們的“昂立常春藤教育”

公衆號哦~

 

 

咳咳,廢話不多說,就讓我們開始吧!

豆大洋

昂立雅思項目部主任 

英國南安普頓大學碩士。熟悉各類應試、留學考試。在教學過程中,通過自己的努力

希望讓孩子享受英語學習,將英語的學習、使用、積累當作自己生活中的一部分,而

不僅僅只是應對考試。同時,也會在教學過程中盡量穿插一些課外小知識,比如其他

國家的本土文化,社會習俗等等,從不同方面拓展學生對于英語或者英語國家的了解。

 

座右銘:Love, Endurance, Peace, Humble & Obedience.

 

說到想玩轉雅思大作文,首先我們要先弄清楚大作文的類型有哪些,這個問題我們縱

觀曆年雅思真題得知,比如:

01

給出一種觀點的同意與否類,提問方式爲:To what extent do you agree or di-

sagree with?

 

e.g.Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a com-

pulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity,

 improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?  (9 T2)

 

02

給出兩種對立觀點的討論類,提問方式爲:Discuss both views and give your own

 opinion.

 

e.g.Some people think that all university students should study whatever they

 like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will

 be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 10 T2

 

03

分析優缺點的利弊類,提問方式爲:Do you think the advantages/ benefits outw-

eigh its disadvantages/problems?

 

e.g.Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the

 advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadva-

ntages?10 T4

 

04

提出一個現象,要求考生分析其原因、結果和解決方法,問題內容一般是提問某個問題的原因

causes+結果(results)或者原因(causes+解決辦法(solutions

 

 

e.g.As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction

 is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job sa-

tisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 7

T3

 

e.g.In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of

health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems

 and what measures could be taken to solve them? 8 T4

 

 

今天,就讓我們看一看第一種,給出一種觀點的同意與否類。我們將從“起承轉合”四個方面去

展開講解。

起:

開頭introduction部分,我們可以將作文的已給要求自己手動稍微修改一下,以上文提到的題

目爲例,

 

原文:Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory

part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the

neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

 

修改後:It is believed that the voluntary community service must be the  obligatory

process during high school education, for instance serving in charity and community

 unpaid. From my perspective, this sort of experience is essential. (Authors opinion)

 

在開頭更改引言時,小夥伴們可以進行同義句改寫,盡量避免使用已經給出的表達或用法。且在

更改的時候,需要注意以原句爲准。同時,需要在該段的最後亮明自己的觀點哦,要麽同意(a-

gree),要麽不同意(disagree),不要選擇中立,因爲問題是:do you agree or disagree

二選一。

 

承:

承接的body正文部分,根據開頭,我們選擇的是,同意題幹的問題,即:我同意義務爲社區提供

服務是高中生活的必要環節。所以在該部分,我需要提出自己的分論點,並且給出支持性的文字解

釋。下劃線部分爲段落主旨句。

 

Unpaid community work, to begin with, actually plays a vital part in high school edu-

cation, helping to release students pressure. (ARGUMENT) Todays high school

education should not be merely circumscribed at stuffing students with knowledge.

 Studying in school virtually takes an extremely big chunk of time. High school stud-

ents are really exhausted. Community service, at this time, could more or less divert

their attention to another field, which could help to alleviate daily school pressure. In

return, after serving in community, they would be better adapted to the new learning

 stage and would obtain greater learning efficiency. (EXPLANATIONS)

 

Furthermore, the experience of work without payment is actually a highlight for stu-

dents to write their resumes when applying to universities. (ARGUMENT) Hence, bei-

ng engaged in community service is not time-wasting at all. Besides in-school aca-

demic performances, top colleges in most countries, attach great importance

 to the practice, such as these unpaid extracurricular activities. Only those well-roun-

ded students would be embraced by the prestigious universities. (EXPLANATIONS)

 

Additionally, the voluntary work is associated with many job principles, which could

 enhance students work adaptation. (ARGUMENT)  The unpaid community service

 programme not only offers students a good opportunity to collaborate in work pr-

ojects, but also provides them with images of future career paths. On one hand,

 these experiences would help to cultivate teamwork spirit. A project can never be

 accomplished without different people fitting their niches. On the other, students

would familiarise themselves with specific work responsibilities and duties in advance.

 It is significant to know whom to liaise with and whom to report to in the work.

 (EXPLANATION)

 

 

此外,在正文部分,觀點與觀點之間可以進行有效的承接、遞進和升華等,使文章看起來結構性

更強一些。

開篇用了to begin with, 講述了社區服務可以緩解學生的在校學習壓力;

第二個觀點用了furthermore進一步討論和解釋,社區服務可以爲自己之後的大學申請提供優勢;

第三個觀點用了additionally,中間又用到on one hand & on the other來進行了深挖,談

義務勞動會給學生帶來工作上的優勢,比如團隊合作技巧和職場工作經驗等;

 

轉:

本文屬于單觀點討論類,從整體結構上來說,並不存在整體的轉折討論部分。這部分在討論類和利

弊類大作文之間更容易出現。

 

合:

總結自己的觀點,此段中切勿出現新的觀點。簡單概括一下即可,一定要有,否則文章的整體結構將

缺失。

In conclusion, unpaid experience during high school education is definitely crucial and

compulsory.

 

注意

在雅思大essay寫作中,語言需要盡量運用formal正式文體拼寫,需學術化;

觀點不明確,

出現單詞之間的縮寫,

觀點中心思想的重複。

 

烤鴨千千萬

在這裏,

總有一群人在與你攜手並進,

總有一些人在爲你加油助威,

總有一種力量在鼓勵你前行,

通往夢想的路上並不孤單。

 

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