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          中考寫作練習|浦東新區2018-2019學年度第一學期期末質量抽查

          發布時間:2019-03-22 作者:昂立外語 來源于:昂立外語網站
          VII. Writing (作文) (共20分)
          94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “ How lucky I am to have _________”( 我多麽幸運能夠擁有 ________’ 爲題,寫一篇不少于 60 個詞的短文,標點符號不占格, 請在答題紙上把作文標題補充完整,如 : a true friend, a warm family, an interesting book….)
            在學習和生活中你可能因爲擁有一位真誠的朋友、一個溫暖的家、一本有趣的書等而感到幸運,請選擇一個方面談談自己的親身經曆,並說明爲何感到幸運。
           
          (注意: 短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其它相關信息,否則不予評分。)
           
          The following is for reference only( 以下表達僅供參考 )
          be satisfied with …..
          encourage sb to do sth
          do sb a favor
          with the help of ……..
          步步 爲贏
          1. Among all the people that I know, no one deserves my respect more than my Chinese teacher.
          2. Jack , whom I respect very well, is a man with expressive eyes and is always wearing a smile which greatly shows that he is easy to get along with. The reason why I feel lucky to have a teacher is his patience and kindness to his students.
           I still remember that period of time when I failed in my Chinese exam, I was lost in a sad condition and couldn't pull it off.3.   It was Jack who noticed my deep disappointment hidden in my heart and gave me encouragement as well as learning skills in spite of his busy work. In the end, I managed to gain my confidence and took a fresh look at failures ever since.
          Above all, 4. despite the fact that I have been away from school for many years, my memory and respect for him will never fade away.
          亮點解析
          1.  否定詞加比較級表示最高級,強調我對老師的尊重
          2.  用了限制性定語從句和非限制性定語從句來描述 老師的性格特征
          3.  用了強調句強調Jack
          4.  用了despite the fact that 同位語從句,讓文采更加的出色。
           
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